August 22

100 word challenge … as it came rushing towards us we…

We just kept swimming and swimming out. Mum was getting really angry now so Trish said we should go back but as i looked back the the before calm ocean a massive wave came flying at us. I quickly told the others and we all got on our boards and started paddling. The wave got faster and faster till it hit us. Mum got up surprised and looked up. For the first time ever we where all standing up on our boards. Even the little ones. The wave got smaller and smaller. That was the best wave ever we all said!

August 15

100 word challendge

       Aw we waked along the beach there started to get more and more seals.

Some where white but most where black and grey . On a rock where no other seals where we saw one little baby white seal. No other seal was there ad he was just laughing and laughing. I asked the tourist guild what is that seal doing and she said it has something wrong with it. It was no friends and just laughs all its life. And from that day flowered i have never leaved again.

August 3

100 word challenge but then the flash made me

I didn’t know what was going… thousands of glass shards came flying at us. I looked at the other kids who had their mouths on the floor. The bang was so loud and  violent that we could feel it inside the container. When the smoke went away you could see that the whole house that the little bomb was in was completely gone and all was left was bricks. The class cheered and screamed for more but miss Rainer said to be quite because we where leaving to get on the bus now. That was the best trip ever everyone said.

July 30

part of my debate

Firstly: If money was the most important thing then money would take over our world and since it would be the thing humans need to rile on and everyone would get so much that you can’t do anything with it. Once you have money as the most important thing for a few years all the metals or resources to make money will go down and not be able to make anymore because they have been making it none stop for years because you agreed that it is the most important thing!

July 29

little Ania short story 2

Ideas:

  1. this story was about a little girl who was different to everyone else. She didn’t like eating meat and vegetables and fruits at all so when it was dinner time she just sat behind her chair and she started to get very sick from not eating
  2. She also didn’t like sleeping in her bed because little Ania loathed beds and sleeping in them because they where uncomfortable so she started to get even more sick.
  3. And she didn’t like playing with doles like all the other girls. If you did give her a doll she would rip them into little peaces and chuck them around her room and feel sad, left out, lonely.

Then when she went to hospital the doctors and nurses didn’t know what was wrong. They tried every medicine ever bit of food, dolls but nothing made her better till she just laid there. Everyone thought she was going to die!

 

Organization

1 The author of Little Ania hooked you in because it is not like other texts you often read. It was different and you could not tell what was going to happen next because it started with a girl who was sick because she never ate her dinner so she goes to the hospital then it goes to her eating plant pots and lamp

June 6

BTN New icebreaker

facts

1 Antarctica is the coldest place on earth

2 It is also the coldest place on earth

3 Australians began adventuring here in the 18th century

Question

1 What is the second most coldest place on earth?

2 What makes it so cold?

Wondering

1 What would it be like going to a cold desert like Antarctica on and icebreaker?

May 30

… in the flash of lightning I saw … 100 word challenge

In a flash of lightning, in a blink of an eye there it was right in front of me i stared at it for a few seconds and then i was pulled away by a tall figure. I toke a step back then looked back at the golden object sitting in the glass container. The man then picked me up like i was no less then a little pebble and put me back in the set and put the belt over me. Dad i say what was that for. I was looking at that wired blob over there.

May 23

BTN Toy guns

Facts

1 Playing with toy guns is a thing kids have been doing for a long time.

2 Kids would buy toy guns to copy what there favourite movie actors would do.

3 Recently a kid was show holding a toy gun in public which annoyed many parents.

Questions

1 Why should kids be able to play with toy guns at all?

2 Why don’t they just completely stop making toy guns?

Wondering

1 What would happen if kids thought it was normal to have guns? They might mistake a fake one from a real one.

May 22

100 word challenge

I was just about to take a bite of my massive soft burger when some hands came out of no where. The hands moved around the table as if they where walking until they reached my burger the hands took hold of it and then a head appeared out of the table and took a massive bite of my burger. I jumped out of my seat and onto the floor. The hands and the head started to emerging  from the table leaving only its legs to come. It was in a suit. Like it was a famous person.