November 20

100 word challenge

It was another day in the park. I had gotten my coffee and the paper like usual. Except this day was different. Today i felt like i was getting watched. Every time i looked around it seemed like there was a figure in a coat. I stopped to take a seat for 15 minutes to read the paper then want to play chess. It had diapered when i sat down but when i was going home i saw it. It was out front my house. It walked up to me and pulled its coat off and in surprise it was my long lost brother.

November 16

…but where would we hide it all?…

Its here! Its all here! The map and everything. I cant believe it. guys come on what are you waiting for? Ok, ok i am coming they he said. I pulled out a massive gold necklace with little pears. We are rich, we are rich but where would we hide it all? We are only young so we cant go far, and if we do what are we going to tell our parents? We are just going to find a place to put our gold! I am shore we will find someplace he said. we only live in a small town.

November 2

100 word challenge: flame, swimming, celebrated, white, tomorrow

I could hear the crowd yelling keep swimming! Keep swimming! I hit the wall for my final lap the crowd still cheering me on. Already celebrating in my head. white ribbons where flying for my country! I hit finished my final lap the crowd screaming as red flames when off. I was shocked that from such a small country had won something so big. I just couldn’t wait for tomorrow to try and win again and come first in the whole world. The swimming world.

October 22

100 wc

As we got deeper into the forest it got harder and muddier making it almost impossible to walk. They group leader just said almost there but really he did not know where to go. It got harder to walk at some people started to walk back. As we kept going we made our way up to gushing water falls. Rocky  sharp edges where every where and moss covered it. Slowly walking along the rocks my foot got stuck mid way. trying to get it out i fell in the water face first. It was hard to see in the water but i am OK now.

August 22

100 word challenge … as it came rushing towards us we…

We just kept swimming and swimming out. Mum was getting really angry now so Trish said we should go back but as i looked back the the before calm ocean a massive wave came flying at us. I quickly told the others and we all got on our boards and started paddling. The wave got faster and faster till it hit us. Mum got up surprised and looked up. For the first time ever we where all standing up on our boards. Even the little ones. The wave got smaller and smaller. That was the best wave ever we all said!

August 15

100 word challendge

       Aw we waked along the beach there started to get more and more seals.

Some where white but most where black and grey . On a rock where no other seals where we saw one little baby white seal. No other seal was there ad he was just laughing and laughing. I asked the tourist guild what is that seal doing and she said it has something wrong with it. It was no friends and just laughs all its life. And from that day flowered i have never leaved again.

August 3

100 word challenge but then the flash made me

I didn’t know what was going… thousands of glass shards came flying at us. I looked at the other kids who had their mouths on the floor. The bang was so loud and  violent that we could feel it inside the container. When the smoke went away you could see that the whole house that the little bomb was in was completely gone and all was left was bricks. The class cheered and screamed for more but miss Rainer said to be quite because we where leaving to get on the bus now. That was the best trip ever everyone said.

July 29

little Ania short story 2

Ideas:

  1. this story was about a little girl who was different to everyone else. She didn’t like eating meat and vegetables and fruits at all so when it was dinner time she just sat behind her chair and she started to get very sick from not eating
  2. She also didn’t like sleeping in her bed because little Ania loathed beds and sleeping in them because they where uncomfortable so she started to get even more sick.
  3. And she didn’t like playing with doles like all the other girls. If you did give her a doll she would rip them into little peaces and chuck them around her room and feel sad, left out, lonely.

Then when she went to hospital the doctors and nurses didn’t know what was wrong. They tried every medicine ever bit of food, dolls but nothing made her better till she just laid there. Everyone thought she was going to die!

 

Organization

1 The author of Little Ania hooked you in because it is not like other texts you often read. It was different and you could not tell what was going to happen next because it started with a girl who was sick because she never ate her dinner so she goes to the hospital then it goes to her eating plant pots and lamp

June 6

BTN New icebreaker

facts

1 Antarctica is the coldest place on earth

2 It is also the coldest place on earth

3 Australians began adventuring here in the 18th century

Question

1 What is the second most coldest place on earth?

2 What makes it so cold?

Wondering

1 What would it be like going to a cold desert like Antarctica on and icebreaker?

May 30

… in the flash of lightning I saw … 100 word challenge

In a flash of lightning, in a blink of an eye there it was right in front of me i stared at it for a few seconds and then i was pulled away by a tall figure. I toke a step back then looked back at the golden object sitting in the glass container. The man then picked me up like i was no less then a little pebble and put me back in the set and put the belt over me. Dad i say what was that for. I was looking at that wired blob over there.